Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give your oppinion
In this day and age, it is the fact that people have different views about some debates around museums.Some that museums should be organized in the forms of entertainment to attract people, whereas others suppose that building museums for the sack of educating and studying .From my point of view,better people,museums offer both entertaining and educational aspects .
On the one hand, it can be argued that museums should just concentrate on education simply because they think that museums are just places in order to provide visitors with the wealth of informative knowledge about events in the past which they did not previously know . This mean that the history behind the objects of museums need to be explained and this can done in different ways .For example,Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors .In addition to that,they suppose that museums are not suitable to take the chill pill or blow off some steam.Therefore, museums can play an essensial role in teaching and training people about history, science, and many sides of life .These are the reasons being attributable to this trend.
On the other hand, some that people have a tendency to like the kind of museums as pleasurable places.Museums are tourist attractions and the purpose of them is to display a collection of interesting objects that many people want to see .Firsly, people surely have a good mood or excited mood when going to the museum since it can both enjoy the breathtaking views by the way the museums deecorate enjoyably around which do not go to the other place to visit .Furthermore, people can broaden their horizon and enrich their knowledge without ease or tension.Like for instance , when people is in need of finding appropriate site to serve their learning and relaxation.You know , nothing is better than when choosing museums as you not only have change of scenery but also gain information a lot.
In conclusion, It occurs to me that I strongly believe that it is a great thing to build the museums in educational nd entertaining way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, you know, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01166180758 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87092744918 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559766763848 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.53397952 49.4020404114 452% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.8 106.682146367 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.6 20.7667163134 330% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430445944075 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227490765514 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760297167447 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256099202728 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688356712151 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.5 13.0946893788 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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