Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged, as it is good for workers and employers. What’s your opinion and discuss the advantages and disadvantages?
Thanks to technological advances such as computers and modems, nowadays people are able to work from home instead of traveling to a workplace on a daily basis. While some believe that this trend should be encouraged since it brings about several advantages for both workers and employers, I would argue that its disadvantages are much greater.
To begin with, teleworking is beneficial to workers and employers to a certain extent. Firstly, employees do not have to travel a long distance to work each day, which helps to reduce the number of vehicles being driven on the roads. This is likely to alleviate severe traffic congestion. If people are required to commute to work daily, they might easily get frustrated as a result of being stuck in constant traffic jams during rush hour. Secondly, employers need not spend a huge amount of money on utilities or office equipment such as computers and telephones, which can partially relieve the financial burden on these individuals. If employees keep working in offices, especially in major cities, their employers will be preoccupied with overhead expenses of office space as well as additional costs of supplies.
However, I still believe that these benefits are vastly outweighed by the following drawbacks. First, due to a lack of social interaction with co-workers, those working from home might feel a sense of isolation and loneliness. This may contribute directly to a rise in depression and other psychiatric disorders among these people in the long run. Additionally, because of many unwanted distractions and interruptions, telecommuters might find it hard to stay focused when working from home. For example, some remote workers may have to soothe their crying toddlers while simultaneously holding a business meeting via their mobile phones. Furthermore, teleworkers are likely to face technical problems such as low-quality video calls or unreliable internet connections. As a result, these people might suffer from low morale, which hinders a company from achieving its business goals.
In conclusion, although people can derive some benefits from telecommuting, I suppose that this trend leads to more drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36734693878 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95204153256 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623906705539 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.872114431 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321389485326 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839814902314 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607130793101 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170338847239 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795535705465 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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