Unemployment is one of the biggest problem of the contemporary society. What do you think are the main cause of unemployment?
What solutions can you suggest?
In many notion around the world, it is considered that unemployment is one of the main difficulties in modern societies. In this essay I will examine the important causes of unemployment and possible solution of this argument.
Unemployment in contemporary world is believed to has several compelling reasons which the increasing number of people or overpopulation is the Most significance one. For simplifying this matter, when population has increased progressively during previous decades, the work infrastructures have not been grown by the government. Thereby, suddenly they have encountered numerous young people who are job seeking. Furthermore with development in technology, various and advanced Machines have invented which are utilized instead of human in factories. For instance, in machines or kitchen implements factories the biggest part of products are assembled by intelligent robots.
There are certain measure which can be taken to alleviate unemployment and it consequences in society. Firstly, the population should be controlled by government, although many societies have started to preventing more than two babies in one family. For illustrating this prevention in China is a good example, due to the law that had legislated and banned people to get more than one baby.
Moreover, people should be encouraged to be entrepreneur instead of being employee in a company. If people start to work for themselves, they will find many simple jobs which have acceptable income, for example, agriculture .
Despite the fact that it is demanding job, there are always many requests for natural foods.
In conclusion, not only can unemployment be addressed by controlling population, but also simple works which people do not attention to them, can be efficient action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54578754579 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18439807034 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7959980259 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142094007024 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521078719642 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562872716151 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777791235935 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678027182369 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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