Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
The modern society is facing ever-increasing crime rate among young people. There appear to be various reasons for such a situation and a number of solutions also appear to be possible, which will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
Perhaps the major factor is the government’s failure to generate employment for the young generation. For example, in India, every year lacs of students are graduating in various fields and become job-ready. Some of them accept the job for which they are over-eligible and others in the absence of job opportunities turn their ways towards committing the crime. Another possible cause is the internet meaning that it has increasingly closely connected people through social media platforms like Facebook, Twitter, and WhatsApp. These are constantly flooded with glamorous lifestyle information of celebrities that young generations follow most. The youngster tries to copy their lifestyle and live like them without considering financial situations they are in and when they short of money they indulge in crime.
Turning to possible solutions, the most obvious step would be for the government is to increase economic activities like accept foreign direct investment from a foreign company and take steps to control the population of the country, this would increase employment and consequently reduce the crime. The second remedy might be social media censorship, which means the government agency would monitor the content of these sites and also enact a law that restricts the use of media by the celebrities to influence young people in the wrong directions.
In summary, the unemployment rate and increasing use of social media appear to be the main cause. Reform in government policy and social media censorship may well lessen the severity of the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39929328622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86871393823 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6886414956 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227616934725 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747734203505 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597473222733 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141956641239 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723165264916 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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