Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars.
To what extent do you agree?
Some would argue that uncompensated society jobs should be done by some criminals rather than giving imprisonment to them. This essay completely disagrees with this statement because prisoners are the threat of society as they can commit the crime again and if they are not put in prison then they would not realize their mistake.
The main reason for not giving any voluntary work to prisoners because they are very dangerous for the community. If governments allow criminals to do some work from outside the prison, they will try to escape from that place as they can get enough time to execute any play with another prisoner. To illustrate, a survey conducted by Business and Law school in California which concluded that 80% of students said that prisoners should allow any work inside the bars because the government wants to save life their citizens and not want to take the risk by allowing criminals to do work in the community.
Another reason is that prisoners will not get any positive impact in their minds because they can easily see the outside life by doing unpaid work for society. While doing work, criminals would be thought that they are useless, they are not getting any reward and the same result they will get after completing the imprisonment. For example, In Moscow, the majority of prisoners do not felt happy by doing unrewarded work in the community as they already see the life behind the bars in which people were not accepted as good humans and it is difficult for them to earn respect again.
In conclusion, I think it is not right for criminals to allow unpaid work in society because they are harmful to other people and they can not change their mindset regardless of doing crime again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81208053691 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4188556331 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486577181208 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0238350344 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238485269216 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114647971671 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436314735993 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155017273986 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376303204224 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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