Some people think that one of the best way to solve environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel of cars and others vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In today's globalized, urbanised and the over-populated world more and more individuals are using motor vehicles in order to go from one place to another place. Some people believe that more vehicles on the road can effect on human environment. I partially agree with the idea and in this essay I will provide some contentious argument to support an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why cost of fuel should be increase is because In the Era of modernization, each and every person have motor vehicle which effect on environment.This means that If less people use motor vehicles this problem might be solve. For example, A recent research concluded that In 2012 Brazil imposed restrictions on heavy motor vehicles due to bad environment. A further point of this idea could be that If fuel prices would grow, more people will use bicycle which is more desirable for human health.
On the flip side, there are several arguments against, unless government increase fuel prices, ozone layer would affect. The result of this phenomenon might be that many illnesses will go up day by day such as Aztama, bronchitis and lung cancer. The decision as to whether masses should use vehicles for emergency case must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To sum up, Although this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. However I believe quite strongly that increasing price of fuel is a better way to solve this problem because less individuals would use vehicles. If authorities impose high taxes on fuel it will be more desirable for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, as to, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75298673919 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2737749732 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160761903064 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592494145414 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471375732291 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992353418751 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289694623878 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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