Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that there is the way for improving the environment which surround us can be only from government and huge companies. But on my view, I disagree with this idea.
It is true that there are some efficient methods to protect environment from the governments and huge companies. For instance, governments can make a law to make environment better, such as fine for people who did not distinguish the refusal or throw away garbage anywhere that can destroy the environment. Or through the companies, they can encourager there employees to volunteer like pick up the garbage from the ground or plant trees in specific area. It is more easy to do in group than by oneself individually.
While there are positive aspects make an effort in group through government or companies, there are still a lot of things that people can do individually by themselves as well. Based on my personal experience, using my own tumbler in cafe instead of plastic or paper cups can reduce the pollution of the environment, and the earth. I did it everyday in my single days after I realize that. another small effort can be don't leave your meal. everyday people leave their food a lot through whole world. It led severe pollution because it take long time to go back to ground. So I want to suggest that from the first time, make your meal's amount for proper , so you can it all at once.
There are various things that people can do for making the environment better through governments and large companies but there is also uncountable ways the efforts can make from each individual persons as well. So I would like to argue that we need to make an effort in both ways, not make it from only one-side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...he environment, and the earth. I did it everyday in my single days after I realize that....
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...in my single days after I realize that. another small effort can be dont leave your mea...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...alize that. another small effort can be dont leave your meal. everyday people leave ...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyday
...all effort can be dont leave your meal. everyday people leave their food a lot through w...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...rld. It led severe pollution because it take long time to go back to ground. So I wa...
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Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... time, make your meals amount for proper , so you can it all at once. There are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60227703855 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7654990574 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328185829383 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100136750176 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934624011348 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21600177693 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543137862453 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.