Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter:
a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country.
b. Describe the public event.
c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.
Dear John,
Hope you are doing great. This morning I was going through the pictures of my trip to America last year and it brought back some great memories. I’d like to invite you to come over and spend some time during one of the festivals here in India.
I’d be delighted if you can make it in time for the festival of Holi. It is celebrated on the 5th of July and should coincide with your vacation plans.
Holi is one of the most popular festivals in our country and is often referred to as the festival of colors. During this occasion people apply color on each other and spend time with their friends and families. This will be an incredible opportunity for you to get to know more about our culture and have a great time as well.
I’ve also planned some other activities for your trip which include visit to famous historical monuments and a food tour. Considering your interest in architecture and being a fellow foodie, I am sure you are going to love what I have in store for you.
Please confirm your availability as soon as possible.
Take care,
ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33178336493 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9090087068 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211235433204 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693561052379 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517514094027 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117064612783 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571713361749 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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