You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir,

My name is Jot and I am an account holder in your bank with account number: 3535364. I am writing this to complain about the service I received from your bank.

Two weeks ago, I ordered a checkbook by filling the appropriate form on the online portal. It was mentioned on the portal that, I will receive my checkbook in ten days but I have not got any. Furthermore, no one from the bank has communicated to me about the delay. I have to pay some bills which can only be paid through cheques.
I would like to know how much more time it will take and when I can expect my checkbook. Also, please look into the matter of why it takes so long to deliver a checkbook and I want you should take strict steps to avoid such a problem again.

I have been your customer for the last fifteen years and this is the first time I have had to complain. It is very disappointing.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
Jot

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37569060773 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41201827906 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9550306346 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264902104557 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836594654342 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562488720088 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12684514874 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224680410752 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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