In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It true that in some countries, the problem of gaining weight of people becomes more popular. Their health and balance levels are decreasing. There are some reasons behind this tendency and several solutions should be adopted by the individual to improve this situation.
There are two primary reasons why the average weight of people is increasing. One reason is that the diet and nutrition which supported into the body are unsuitable. Several bad habits of people such as having more than 3 meals a day, especially the food is addicted full nearly by night when the energy can not liberate throughout activities anymore. According to the researcher show that using many products source from starch like potato, rice, cake, chocolate,... Even eating so much fast food due to work is so busy are also rationable to lead to health issues. Furthermore, lack of doing exercise every day, a large fat in their physical cannot consume, that usually causes many other diseased harmfully, impact directly to life- span of people.
Fortunately, many measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be having a diet reasonable, for instance, eating more vegetables and fruits, restrict the use of meat, seafood, sugar food, ... besides, drinking water as much as possible. A second measure would be doing exercise regularly or practise any sport not only bring happiness with everybody around you rather than living inside the house but also improve the healthy by pushing diseased, virus and take the heart stronger.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reason for overweight and unbalance of the body but steps to be taken to tackle this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53793438112 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8324753716 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204504928502 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689165251837 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625052905356 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11971786873 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397140096929 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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