Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because information can be seen on tv and internet.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Global trotting is quiet common now a days some individuals believe that it is essential to move overseas, whereas rest of the individuals suggest that instead of visiting foreign countries it could be better option to have access on mass media to gather the particulars.
In contemporary view, global tours are rising day by day.Some bodies wish to employed in other countries, Whereas most of the juvenile are excited to pursue the higher studies from international educational institute.Many of the scholar and researchers drive themselves for their concern analysis and findings.Moreover sportsman, also have international games .In addition tourist came across the country because they are curious about territory as well as cultural norms and values.
On the flip side, it is an undeniable reality that technology advancements having significant impact on our lives.As this is an age of automation and modern era.So every one could gets its relative facts and views from internet, This seems to be quiet feasible but we cannot make sure that how much reliable these relative figures are ,Although its a matter of few minutes that we could have easily access on our concern details.but we can not sure its reliability.
To sum up it is concluded that to move abroad is delightful rather than to distract from this joyful interesting journey.Govt should also create opportunities for the masses who show their concern and should announce a relief package for some deserving students who had a wish to pursue higher studies from abroad as well as for workers, sportsman, businessman even to every deserving personality, because it helps to generate a great revenue for our homeland. Eventually , i must say that people do not take trips,trip take people.
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because information can be seen on tv and internet Discuss bith views and give your opinion 67
- Popular events like football worldcup and other international sporting occasion are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotion in a safe way 56
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because information can be seen on tv and internet Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- In many countries children are engage in some kind of paid work some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it is valueable 67
- A few major languages are increasingly spoken in different countries while the usage of other is rapidly declining Is it a positive or negative development Give reason of your answer and include a relevant example from your own knowledge and experience 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as for, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24028268551 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95019786236 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.57869532 49.4020404114 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.6 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100593027499 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049112053593 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106357596147 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534223343631 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151169405334 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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