One way to solve the problem of congestion on roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles.
How could this alleviate this congestion?
What are the measures can you suggest to deal with congestion in the cities?
The great innovation for the mankind is the invention of wheels. It is an irrefutable fact that traffic jam
has become a serious problem in most of the cities worldwide. Although increasing the taxes on private
cars is one of the solutions to curb this problem, there are some other repercussions as well, which I am
going to discuss in the looming paragraphs.
To commence with, increasing tax on transport may contribute to address the traffic jam on the ground
and it can diminish the increasing number of vehicles on the road day by day. The exorbitant cost for
purchasing and maintaining the vehicle will encourage individuals to opt a better alternative like public
transport or car pooling. For instance, Singapore has a policy of 100% taxes on vehicles; this is perhaps
the reason why Singapore stands on number one in the terms of less traffic jams.
On the other hand, there are some other ways to eradicate this issue, firstly, the government should
improve the reliability and condition of public transport like buses, trains and, encourage people to use
them. Secondly, government should make the policies by which the number of vehicles on the road
decline automatically. Taking Mr. Arvind Kejriwal as an example, the Chief Minister of Delhi, who
implemented the odd and even formula in Delhi in October 2016, and this formula not only reduced the
traffic but reduced the air pollution as well.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, traffic can be reduced not only by imposing taxes but by
other ways also, because imposing taxes will directly trigger the pockets of individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01102941176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73720827631 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1817039152 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18984245822 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688778100456 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04902388978 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053855048176 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472793781303 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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