The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few decades, technology has a huge impact on everyday life, especially the way people shop. With the increasing popularity of online shopping, some people believe that the shops will run out of business because of this trend. However, I completely disagree and think that physical stores will always have a place in every city and this essay will elaborate the reasons supporting this view.
First of all, the foremost reason is that some people, especially women, have an obsession with the shopping. In other words, such people only want to go out in shopping malls for the sake of window shopping in order to satisfy themselves. This is not possible when buying stuff online through the internet. For instance, a recent study results published by the students of the Oxford university states that more than 70% of the female university students revealed to have spent more time in the big malls rather than focusing on studying.
Another vital point to consider is the lack of trust that people have on the online stores. Even though these stores provide a variety of products, still people are skeptical of the quality provided by them. As a result, they like to visit the traditional brick and mortar stores where they can check the standards on the spot without having to worry about contacting the customer support in case of any issue. A survey result revealed by the Times magazine in 2018 confirms this opinion as well where almost 60% participants reported their bad experiences of e-shopping.
To conclude, although online shopping has become very popular these days, retail stores will not be much affected by it. I opine that these stores are not threatened by the internet shopping as people will always prefer these stores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96271186441 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44379273941 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3933433665 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167852460394 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616373734768 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052764230818 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108556490872 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639153548281 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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