In many countries children are engage in some kind of paid work.some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it is valueable.
It is quiet common that adults are tend to labour world wide to earn money.Few individuals believe that it is corroding activity whereas else think it is worth for them.However in my opinion it depends on nature of work they actually do.
Although it is undeniable fact juvinile derive themselves some working scheme it is because that world map contains approximately 70 percent developing and under develop countries, on a large extent they are not economically stable Due to rising popoulation factor with the passage of time.so in this regard their societies moving their youngers in labour force to fullfill the basic needs to dwell.
On the flip side this phenomenon seems ti be very creative and generate positive vibes,even though youngers are introducing new inventions and are laible to fame their homeland in every field for instance thechnology ,sports, education .Likewise Arfa kareem a youngest microsoft certified professional in age of 9 and iman qureshi 11 year younger tennis star Moreover malala yousafzai the noble laureate at age of 17 as well.
Inspite of all these we can not ignore child labour who work hard day and night in factories ,automobile workshops.Even they work in peoples home where they suffer many hardships towards their owner.They lose their self respect just for the sake of money.
To sum up all the facts it is concluded that working children is not worse thing it all about standard and quality of work they do.we should categories that whether that activity is healthy and safe for children or not.
- In many countries children are engage in some kind of paid work some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it is valueable 67
- Improvement in health education and trade are essential for the development of poor nations However the govt of richer nations should take more responsbility for heloing poor nations in such areas To what extent you agree or disagree 61
- A few major languages are increasingly spoken in different countries while the usage of other is rapidly declining Is it a positive or negative development Give reason of your answer and include a relevant example from your own knowledge and experience 61
- Popular events like football worldcup and other international sporting occasion are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotion in a safe way 56
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because information can be seen on tv and internet Discuss bith views and give your opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.078125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69688586325 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68359375 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8746223013 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 260.0 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113476574808 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057185658605 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325462726033 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057185658605 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325462726033 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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