Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Today, some people tend to work their own, more then working for other farms. There would be some reasons, why is this occurs. However, Self-employment has some drawbacks. In this essay we will contrast reasons and cons, thus will lead to logical conclusion, in my point view.
Firstly, In a company generally an employee feel that discomfort. In other words, A person working under a boss feel pressurized and a lot of stress. For instantiate, My friend were working in I.I.T, his senior were always put pressure on him to work for long hour, No matter whether he is comfortable or not, like a puppet. However, In self-employment a person is an boss him-self.
Secondly Money, In general basic salary is 2 to 3 thousand dollars But being a self-dependent, there is no limit of income is upon you how much efforts you can put. For example, Delivery boy may earn 10 dollar per shipping and that takes up-to half hour, which equals to 20 dollar per hour so, it depend on a person's work.
Nevertheless, Some companies have extra facilities, medical insurance, holidays and so on, But self-employee do not have that. it is may be a dark side although, For instance, Employees have at least 30 days holidays every year though self-employee does not. For another example, full time worker can take a leave if he is sick and company pay you as well as for your medical.
To concluded, Being a self-dependent would be a good idea, if a person knows about few disadvantages of that though, cons may be not a big concern. To be mentally stable and to earn more money people move towards self employment. However, a person can not take advantages of company's extra facilities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ome people tend to work their own, more then working for other farms. There would be...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...tantiate, My friend were working in I.I.T, his senior were always put pressure on...
^
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...However, In self-employment a person is an boss him-self. Secondly Money, In g...
^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...condly Money, In general basic salary is 2 to 3 thousand dollars But being a self...
^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e is no limit of income is upon you how much efforts you can put. For example, Deliv...
^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
.... For example, Delivery boy may earn 10 dollar per shipping and that takes up-to half ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...kes up-to half hour, which equals to 20 dollar per hour so, it depend on a persons wo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...ich equals to 20 dollar per hour so, it depend on a persons work. Nevertheless, So...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llar per hour so, it depend on a persons work. Nevertheless, Some companies ha...
^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...on, But self-employee do not have that. it is may be a dark side although, For ins...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...employee does not. For another example, full time worker can take a leave if he is sick a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as for, at least, for example, for instance, in general, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74657534247 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85869274773 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8374831939 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335232864963 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109638786408 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084826703097 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183152893316 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823440255559 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ome people tend to work their own, more then working for other farms. There would be...
^^^^
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...tantiate, My friend were working in I.I.T, his senior were always put pressure on...
^
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...However, In self-employment a person is an boss him-self. Secondly Money, In g...
^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...condly Money, In general basic salary is 2 to 3 thousand dollars But being a self...
^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e is no limit of income is upon you how much efforts you can put. For example, Deliv...
^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
.... For example, Delivery boy may earn 10 dollar per shipping and that takes up-to half ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...kes up-to half hour, which equals to 20 dollar per hour so, it depend on a persons wo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...ich equals to 20 dollar per hour so, it depend on a persons work. Nevertheless, So...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llar per hour so, it depend on a persons work. Nevertheless, Some companies ha...
^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...on, But self-employee do not have that. it is may be a dark side although, For ins...
^^
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...employee does not. For another example, full time worker can take a leave if he is sick a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as for, at least, for example, for instance, in general, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74657534247 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85869274773 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8374831939 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335232864963 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109638786408 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084826703097 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183152893316 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823440255559 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.