Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, Some have a tendency to think that communicate by spoken words may play a pivotal role more than communicate by written words.From my point of view, either spoken forms or written forms are essential in unbiased way.Therefore, I all the way disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, spoken language, help them promote and facilitate daily communication.Literally, all social activities which people engage in such as making a purchase, exchanging information or chatting with friends.For example , when they buy something, they can own it in conveniently way by oral words .Further more, people can easily render uttering words with others when they are unable to control themself. Like for instance, if they accidentally used alcoholic beverages,they sometimes may have few mistakes words with parents or others then they can use body language, facial expressions and eye contact to explain those words which they said in a friendly way.
On the other hand, written forms are of utmost importance. In some situations in the life, with superior advantages which sometimes written communication have an high edge over oral communication.From legal perspective, when people enter into a contract, it may be made in written words or oral words but in some jurisdictions, certain special types of contact must be made in written words not spoken words.If not, those agreements or promises are valid. Moreover, written words as a way of helping people store good ideas or meaningful lessons in their life .To composer or poet, it is the only way for them to save the composition or poem and somehow it would spread to the audience especially for young generation or their grandchildren
In conclusion, I firmly believe that both spoken communication and written communication are equally crucial as well in our society nowadays. People need to consider developing parallel those skills .
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- Writing task 1 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15698465576 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.840647803 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.142857143 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.7142857143 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224151061149 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106900307774 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899015886717 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170680366424 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913230442654 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
... more than communicate by written words.From my point of view, either spoken forms o...
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...ten forms are essential in unbiased way.Therefore, I all the way disagree with this state...
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Suggestion: Literally
...mote and facilitate daily communication.Literally, all social activities which people eng...
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Suggestion: For
...ng information or chatting with friends.For example , when they buy something, they...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion or chatting with friends.For example , when they buy something, they can own i...
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...own it in conveniently way by oral words .Further more, people can easily render u...
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...n it in conveniently way by oral words .Further more, people can easily render uttering...
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Suggestion: , they
...ey accidentally used alcoholic beverages,they sometimes may have few mistakes words w...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly way" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to explain those words which they said in a friendly way. On the other hand, written forms ar...
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Suggestion: a
...ch sometimes written communication have an high edge over oral communication.From ...
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...ve an high edge over oral communication.From legal perspective, when people enter in...
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Suggestion: If
... made in written words not spoken words.If not, those agreements or promises are v...
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...deas or meaningful lessons in their life .To composer or poet, it is the only way ...
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...as or meaningful lessons in their life .To composer or poet, it is the only way fo...
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... young generation or their grandchildren In conclusion, I firmly believe that bot...
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...onsider developing parallel those skills .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15698465576 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.840647803 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.142857143 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.7142857143 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224151061149 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106900307774 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899015886717 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170680366424 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913230442654 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.