Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While art is claimed to be unnecessary for the society by some, others do not agree with the argument. As for me, I would state that art is significantly important for everyone because of the following reasons.
Firstly, art is a powerful source of relaxation. It helps thousands of people who suffer from depressions and anxiety. When people paint, they use different colours to express their negative emotions, painful memories, feelings on the paper. This process helps people fight anger, loss, and look at the situation from the different angle. For example, psychologists often use art-therapy and colour therapy working with clients, especially minors, to help them visualize their issues and, thus, fix them.
Moreover, art is essential in educational purposes. These days, numerous galleries are filled with multiple kinds of pieces of art, each of which has its unique story and style. Being had made by different known and unknown artists, they can show the current generation things that existed before and are not available to be seen in real time. For example, art gives us an opportunity to see faces of not only famous scientists, politicians or royalty, but also represent the lifestyle people had centuries ago. This way children learn about their history and cultures, and the experience of long-gone civilizations, like Ancient Egypt with its mummies, or Ancient Greece with its marvellous statues of Gods.
To conclude, art plays a valuable role in peoples lives letting them to express their emotions, creativity and pass their knowledge and experiences for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27843137255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72774346129 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0002572671 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231384357563 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800711246369 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563973461136 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140939209197 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486634756375 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.