Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
parents are admitting their class="children">children in public schools because they may include no taxes, which class="is">is most-likely in the favor of provience's education system. I totally disagreed with this argument. however, In this essay class="we">we class="will">will consider nagetive aspects of class="it">it, thus class="will">will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, paying class="tax">tax in any class="form">form class="that">that class="would">would be return to us in many situation. In other words, police, fire-brigade, hospitals, and class="so">so on. they are working to class="help">help people in their own way class="so">so, why class="would">would class="we">we spend extra for studies? Well, To support class="poor">poor puplis who do not have money to adapt degree. For instantiate, when a single class="parent">parent pay more funds for their child's better education class="that">that class="will">will directly class="go">go to eduaction-minister in the class="form">form of class="tax">tax and class="that">that class="is">is the inhert of government schools. Moreover, lower class families can afford.
Secondly, Nowadays the government school's study class="is">is not class="so">so good. however, with the class="help">help of the taxes class="it">it may be at peak in few years. For example, richer parents go for best schools and they class="help">help class="poor">poor class="children">children without even knowing class="that">that, and i think that if they deducted taxes class="form">form private schools government school can be locked-down.
To concluded, There may be a lot of difficulties poor class have to deal with i would be a great public schools raise the amount of taxes. That will definitly improve government schooling system along with that employment would be at its peak
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.34156378601 5.12529762239 163% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.78068573665 2.80592935109 313% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621399176955 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 100.293574173 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.785714286 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.06349881776 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585825342438 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473545783179 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749545148564 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409916492615 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.92 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 30.8 12.4159519038 248% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.