You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early.
Write a letter to the agency. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes
explain why you need to break the contract.
Dear Sir,
My name is Hero Devrani and I have been renting the flat in Shukan Riverview from you for the past seven months. I am sure you are aware that I have been a good tenant during this period. I always pay my rent on time and keep the flat clean and intact.
My rental agreement with you was for one year and the contract ends in December. Unfortunately, I will need to leave flat in October, which is, in fact, two months early. The reason for this is that I have got a transfer order for Japan from my company and as per it I have to report there at the beginning of November month. I am afraid this is beyond my control.
As I am now unable to stay here until the end of the contract, I would be extremely grateful if you release me from it early. I am aware that this is not normally allowed but I hope you can understand my situation and would oblige me by returning my deposit.
Yours faithfully,
Hero Devrani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as for, in fact, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21111111111 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31924317157 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3873076003 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26076249261 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102508858719 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066791728937 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169369507473 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549616612179 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.