The charts give information about simile of various kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The charts give information about simile of various kinds of energy production of France in two years.
Overall,Petro illustrated 29.27% in 1995,but in 2005 Petro reduced to 19.55%.0ther energy productions raised during 10 years.There are three percentages begun with 29,in 2005 there are two numbers which started with 30.Very small number showed Other energy production in each year.
In 1995 year the percentages of productions are lower than 2005 year except Petro.Coal displayed 29.80%.How I said at the top the Other energy production exhibited very small number and it is 4.90%.After the Other,in the second place with the small number is Nuclear,it demonstrated 6.40%.One of the productions which explained big percentage is Petro 29.27%.The last energy production and product with high percent is Gas 29.63%
In 2005 year the percentages higher than 1995.Very high percent indicated Coal 30.93%.In the second place with the big percentage is Gas 30.31%.Other energy production showed 9.10%,Nuclear is 10.10%.Petro demonstrated 19.55% and it is lower than 1995 year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61349693252 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01712028127 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 244.745218998 43.030603864 569% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.0 112.824112599 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.3333333333 22.9334400587 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308880146664 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.375421701382 0.103423049105 363% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.334020328655 0.0843802449381 396% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305739396856 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.313860349354 0.0819641961636 383% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.2329268293 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 61.2550243902 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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