The charts below show the medical research funding amount in millions of Dollars in Someland and also shows the death number for this area.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
Write at least 150 words.
The given bar charts give data on the proportion of money used for medical research in Someland and providing the number of deaths in this area. Units are represented in millions.
Overall, the highest funding was paid for AIDS while the number of deaths of TB was the most. It can be seen that higher funding generally produced a better result.
In 1990, the research expenditure for TB was the lowest, just 25 million while AID’s fund received more than 150 million. Research funding in Leprosy and Tropical diseases were given approximately 100 million. In comparison with the budget used for medical research in Malaria, at 50 million, the money invested for medical research in Diarrhoea was 10 million higher.
The second graph shows that the highest number of deaths in Someland was caused by TB. Since the highest amount was funded for TB research, it shows that there was a correlation between the amount spent on researching the disease and the casualties caused. The TB disease caused 1,5 million people to die, which is fourth as high as the number of deaths caused by Diarrhoea and seventh as high as deaths for Leprosy. In addition, the figures for the victims who could not recover from Malaria, Tropical disease, and AIDS were around 0,8 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...ere given approximately 100 million. In comparison with the budget used for medical resear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94418604651 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45929985156 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539534883721 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9569417118 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317554845079 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12587085822 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738098398075 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198301699204 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526741426509 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.