some people believe that children should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
children are pillars of the nation. So a fair amount of people believe that children should indulge themselves in social activities for personal growth and society welfare as well. I completely accord with this notion and my supportive viewpoints will be given in the following paragraphs.
To embark on, social work helps children to flourish several practical skills which lead them to the path of success. During the social work, children get to interact with numerous people, try to combat their problems by listening and comprehending, makes a good listener and intellectual person.for instance, if they help senior citizens by providing goods because they cannot arrange by going to market, makes responsible and mature.these kinds of skills help them in every arena and filled with the brim of self-esteem.
in addition to this, a sense of cooperation, teamwork, patience, are being developed while working. for instance, if they grow saplings in a society, it would not only help to make environment serene and attractive but also helps to develop responsibility towards nature. if they start work in groups they can also advane the leadership skills.
However, adolescents have abundance pressure of studies, have to complete homework on time and on top off they need to prepare for exams which makes them lethargic and sluggish. To over counter this problem, they need to spend some time in outdoors games that they could rejuvenate themselves in spite of doing social work.
in bird's eye view, social work helps to enrich multifarious skills which is arduous to learn by theoretical studies. it's really a great job if one can do,but to do on the cost of studies and compromise with future this is also not prudent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14840989399 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75242563394 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.4523679878 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164362030728 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645574975115 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045480927 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949851512466 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371378453497 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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