Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a diverse range of opinion on the issue of wild animals’ extinction. While some individuals argue that all wild animals ought to be preserved, others take the view that only a selected part of these species should be saved. In my opinion, I believe that although protecting wild animals can be costly, overall they help to stabilize the earth’s atmosphere.
On the one hand, a growing number of people think that all untamed animals should be shielded and I agree. One key reason is that all of these fierce animals, that are part of our ecosystem, help to contribute to global stability. In other words, each of these species, no matter how small, not only boost the productivity of the biosphere by protecting water resources, but also reduce the warming of the globe. For example, sea lions are used to control climate change by monitoring ocean salinity, temperature and water pressure. This shows that if any of these untamed animals should go in extinct, it can lead to a catastrophic effect on the environment.
On the other hand, others opine that it is better to safeguard a small number of wild animals. This is because conserving the entire wild animals require an outrageous amount of money, which they believe should be allocated to basic human needs such as shelter, education and healthcare. Furthermore, the protection of some savage animals is necessary because it helps to reduce the population of these species, which can become a threat to human existence. For instance, many wild animals such as antelope and zebra if safeguarded, can be dangerous to inhabitants as they would take over the people’s farming areas for grazing.
In conclusion, despite the varying views about the protection of wild animals, I believe that all wild animals should be protected because they help in stabilizing the climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...rs opine that it is better to safeguard a small number of wild animals. This is because conservin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02605863192 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74541244995 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7464186567 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473629294067 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173611967262 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121892726045 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343628726386 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119469620014 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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