You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have
some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear levis,
I am writing to inform you about the consequences which hold me back to appear on the next week for my duties. It is a medical emergency with the heartiest uncle of mine that has a heart attack last day.
Let me explain my situation in detail. Last night, on my way back home, I received a call from my aunt, lives in a different city from there. She was sobbing and could not speak any word, I asked her to give her phone to someone else who can make the situation clear. Abruptly, a heavy voice came from another side and said, I am Dr.Lincoln, your relative suffering from cardiac arrest. This one sentence wipe out all the confusions and a decision is made by myself to go there and help them because they are the only family I have.
Shall I request to extend my joining date to 3 to 4 days later to the former date so that, I can cope with this intense circumstance and console my loved one? Furthermore, financial help will be very grateful to rejuvenate my family situation.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Arfa Jabeen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...ne that has a heart attack last day. let me explain my situation in detail. last...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
... let me explain my situation in detail. last night, on my way back home, I received ...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... call from my aunt, lives in a different city from there. She was sobbing and cou...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lincoln
...ame from another side and said, I am Dr.Lincoln, your relative suffering from cardiac a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...relative suffering from cardiac arrest. this one sentence wipe out al the confusions...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eful to rejuvenate my family situation. Looking forward to your reply. Yours ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Arfa Jabeen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47959183673 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44693792446 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.266233279 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146876896338 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566088703113 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477630264854 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843494727482 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375072478613 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.