All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few years, workplace equality from the perspective of holidays granted has taken center stage. While some are saying that everyone working for an organization should be provided with the same number of off days, others argue that personnel doing different kind of jobs must obtain different number of holidays. I completely agree with the latter and will bolster my opinion in this essay with relevant examples.
Firstly, different type of job profiles entail different degrees of pressure, which in turn result in different ranges of vacation days. That is, the amount of mental / physical pressure would depend on the job the person does. So if one was to do a high pressure job, he/she would require more number of days to recuperate. In contrast, if a person was doing a menial or redundant job, the need for time to unwind would drop steeply. For example, in a hospital, the pressure that in on the shoulders of a surgeon is significantly higher than on who is in billing thus requiring the surgeon to take more vacation days.
In addition, the number of vacation days also depends on the business vertical that the employee is part of. To elaborate, the class of work an employee does restricts his or her ability to take vacation on days that would usually be considered a holiday. For example, call center executives who work on a 24 x 7 shift, serving clients from another timezone would not be able to take holidays regularly and on days which are considered as a local holiday. Further more if the job profile is business critical, taking a vacation on certain days would not be practical as the job would require them to work on holiday season. For examples sales representatives of supermarkets work more on Christmas day when people go rampant on shopping.
In conclusion, the varying pressure the personnel of a company would take and also the type of business he / she is associated with would determine the number of holidays provided to the employee thus building a system where employee with different jobs get different quantity of holidays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'shift' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'shifts'.
Suggestion: shifts
... center executives who work on a 24 x 7 shift, serving clients from another timezone ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88418079096 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68048037976 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4275128765 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28708372044 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950020853042 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662635831474 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185409963741 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607286875402 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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