It is important to know about the happening of the world
It goes without saying in this sophisticated and progressive world in which we live, every part of the world something worse is happening and because of the global village phenomenon, all human beings are aware of them. but recently there is hot controversy among that some people believing knowing about world news are not necessary and so damaging to daily normal life, others stand at the other side of the continuum holding view being aware of world news is unavoidable and significant. As far as I am concerned, the first group has a more convincing idea, there are some reasons for the choice and I would like to put them in the following way.
To begin with, bitter news which not affecting rightly the individual's life condition just leads to increased anxiety and stress states. To put it on the other words, if an extremely bad event happens for a person or people of the country suddenly, others at the other side of the world will not have the ability to fix them and they just become sad and take a negative attitude to the world of human beings. Additionally, nowadays, the main problem of the societies is psychological disorders exclusively depression and anxiety, although now people more connected due to the internet and social networks but on the contrary, more having problems and could not have the ability to reduce their stress because every moment they open to news.
Moreover, the news brings the attention of the people to itself and supply their mind energy. to elucidate on this point, for every single work our body and mind need energy for better results, when our mind encounters enormous news regularly so, wasting its' energy cause to fewer outcomes of the works. As an illustration, as a psychologist I see that people are more curious to explore news every day, are not so active in the brain functions and the long times the percentage of the brain's ability will be reduced. this issue demonstrates how much news is harmful to cognition ability.
To sum up, based on the aforementioned points above, In my opinion being aware of global news, not a favorable choice because it not only cause to getting depression and anxiety but also decreases healthily using our mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81315789474 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60333660825 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563157894737 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3176194635 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.272727273 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5454545455 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126282865496 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418412756631 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069629784818 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720576113653 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883607604722 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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