The diagram represents the rock cycle. Write a university report of not less than 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the information about formation of rocks and their complete cycle.
Overview, there are three major types of rocks that are igneous, sedimentary and metamorphic which formed under various natural conditions such as erosion and deposition.
Firstly, when the volcano erupts, the molten magma reaches the earth’s surface. This lava cools quickly and form igneous rock which again rises slowly to higher surface. Secondly, when rain water pours on this rock then it erodes into sand and stones resulting in deposition on lower surface in form of sediments. Now these sediments turned into sedimentary rocks. Thirdly, under high temperature and pressure, sedimentary rocks converted into metamorphic rocks. Lastly, when level of temperature and pressure rises further then metamorphic rocks transform into magma which is the initial state, thus, completing the rock cycle. Apart from this, sedimentary and metamorphic rocks can also change their form to other rocks when it rises slowly to surface.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... temperature and pressure rises further then metamorphic rocks transform into magma ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63461538462 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5772977786 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1675966246 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996988433068 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046690469189 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032468305334 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751499595016 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280677773711 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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