Some people say it is important to keep your home and your work place tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this ?
One must agree that an individual spends maximum time in either house or office. Some believe that the place where we stay and work should be clean, arranged well and in a desired position. However, it is debatable. I totally agree with the opinion and shall share the reasons for the same.
Home and office cleanliness is crucial factor in one's healthy lifestyle. Untidy place impacts the health in numerous ways and can potentially reduce life span with diseases like dust allergy, skin issues and even cancer. This will have larger implications on toddlers and elder people. For example, a research found that people who worked in untidy places and lived in bad accomodations are expected to live 10 years shorter than their life expectancy. Hence , it is very important to maintain neatness across the regions.
Organising skills play major role in productivity. People who organise their things and position them in planned manner have advantages like time saving, finding objects easily and often found to be in better positions. This not only saves our time, but also relieves from the last minute stress for finding objects. For example, Steve jobs is very particular with the arrangements and people around him attribute his success to this factor. This clearly tells us that
To conclude, it is essential to be neat, organising everything and positioning them precisely. This essay discussed how cleanliness can be beneficial to health of the entire family and other skills increase productivity and saves lot of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.156 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6012610905 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3909843664 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173057458467 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487457926451 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031386512746 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941839361715 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254595939229 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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