As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken?
The development of the travel and hospitality industry leads to the proliferation of tourists every year. Although tourism is the main stream revenue in many countries, it faces up with multiple accusations of environmental problems.
There are many reasons why airline industry wreaks environmental havoc. First, aircraft which are not run by bio fuels create negative impact on nearby communities because of their emissions. With the aim of maximizing their bottom line, airline aviation is not willing to replace coal and gas plants. Second, the more tourists use airplane as a time-saving transportation in the pursuit of entertainment, the more demand for coach services which bring airport passengers to their homes. The density flow of coaches on the street releases a huge amount of carbon dioxide which causes atmospheric pollution.
There are many solutions proposed to develop this lucrative industry while ensuring that our environment is fresh and clear. First, the government can raise fuel costs. As a result, it forces the airline to rethink and find other ways to consume cheap clean power or reduce fights served for the airline passengers. Second, the government also can institute ban on aircraft serving the first class or premium class. Because people who fly the first class have a bigger carbon footprint than others, the less luxury passengers experience the less harmful to the environment.
Although airline industry is one of the titans of national economy, it leaves many devastating consequences for ecosystem. Focusing on developing local travel is another way to decrease the number of airport passengers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44140625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86596054725 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5818372922 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101800287041 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297985866176 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304340798173 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579806269788 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122552612901 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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