Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Recently, the trend of giving birth later in life has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Some reasons are attributable to this issue which has significant impacts on society and family life.
There are two compelling motivations contributing to defer having children of young couples. First, having babies later allow spouses to have more time to devote to their work, which ensures their children a better condition in the future. In fact, the children born in family with prosperous and experienced parents can get better and more comprehensive education, which permits them to become a good and well-educated citizen down the road. Second, if people postpone in reproducing, they will have more time to enjoy life after marriage with their partner to understand each other deeper before deciding to give birth or not. According Times New York, there is a trend of citizens in America that tying the knot just after some loving months, then they have babies and break up some months later, which means that they don’t spend enough time together to perceive their partner well. This leads to giving birth soon but without giving them a close-knit family or assuring them a bright future.
In the present scenario, nobody can deny the benefits of having children later on society and family life. In terms of society, when people defer giving birth, they will dedicate all their energy and time to their work, which means the labour market is increasingly competitive. As a result, the economy of this country will miraculously develop. For illustrate, Japan’s economy has been grown rapidly for recently decades due to the trend of marrying and giving birth later of residents. In terms of individuals, by having childrens later, young married couples can spend more time working hard to get promotion and an ideal salary. In fact, without having babies, couple can have freedom to travel to any country they want to find a suitable and stable job to support their family and save money for the birth of their babies
In conclusion, I strongly believe spouses should give birth later to focus on developing themselves and earning more money to ensure their children a better future and contribute to the prosperity of their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06166219839 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51039426489 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525469168901 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4362454747 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312834651432 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117947024025 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812899250031 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202192810688 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033707018166 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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