An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
A patient with a very contagious disease, has a lot going through his mind, whether he will get cured or will have the disease forever. Some disease can even take the lives of patient. Doctors are always there for all the treatments of a patient, but one cannot go to a chest physician for a kidney disease. One cannot expect a good treatment if he has a very bad judgements about the disease. The author above claims that patients should be given permission to access the records of a doctor to expect a better treatment. I mostly agree with the claim that records must be shown to patients, but also at the same time one cannot judge the doctor by his past records.
To begin, even after a doctor has completed his graduation with a good degree and has a great knowledge in the field, there are some cases where they are not good at operations or taking it with hands. One can take example of Dr. Harish Chandrabose, a professor from Indian Aims Medical University, he is a well known doctor and people from far around the world comes for a medical checkup to him. But he has many allegations that he is not that good as a surgeon, he has misreably failed 4 operations. Because of his bad records people stop coming to him for operations. For a patient, it's about a matter of life or death, one is spending profuse of money in order to get cured. If a person is not sure that about how skilled the doctor is, the person will not be convinced for the operation. It is the responsibility of a doctor to show his records in order to convince the patient that he is capable for the operation and has successfully performed many such surgeries in past.
On the other hand, even if a doctor does his job well but if person could not sustained because of his weak or delicate conditions, one cannot question the doctor for his job. If a person already has a weak liver and even by transplanting the liver couldn't saved his life, then it's not the doctor who should be questioned. The job of a doctor was to transplant a liver, if he sucessfully did his job and even after that still patient couldn't survive, then it's the will of god to decide how long was he in this world. For a single bad record after a 100 good records, doctors are not god who can predict the future of a patient whether he will live or not.
Whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition, is a very nuanced statement to say. In conclusion, for patients, yes sometimes they should check up their records before any treatment, but not all the time a doctor can gaurantee their lives. Even after a successful treatment people can die. Hence, it is very uncertain to say such a bold statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'judgement'?
Suggestion: judgement
...t a good treatment if he has a very bad judgements about the disease. The author above cla...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great knowledge'.
Suggestion: great knowledge
...s graduation with a good degree and has a great knowledge in the field, there are some cases wher...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...g to him for operations. For a patient, its about a matter of life or death, one is...
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Line 3, column 973, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...cessfully performed many such surgeries in past. On the other hand, even if a doctor...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'sustain'
Suggestion: sustain
...es his job well but if person could not sustained because of his weak or delicate conditi...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ver and even by transplanting the liver couldnt saved his life, then its not the doctor...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... the liver couldnt saved his life, then its not the doctor who should be questioned...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...s job and even after that still patient couldnt survive, then its the will of god to de...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...hat still patient couldnt survive, then its the will of god to decide how long was ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ime a doctor can gaurantee their lives. Even after a successful treatment people can die. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, well, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43117408907 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51361338019 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451417004049 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9311745793 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.238095238 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5238095238 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257546939079 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086529657805 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656581962238 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164723548196 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369573013188 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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