Is it good to experiment on animals? What do you think?
Every living being has a nature-gifted will to live a long and healthy life. Still, weak animals get killed by predators in nature by stronger ones. We, humans, do different experiments on animals so that we can live prosperous life though; some people are in opposition of experimenting on animals furthermore, they are willing to stop this inhumane behavior with animals using the law.
As a human, we are gifted with the capability to think. As a result, we've managed to overcome our primitive behavior and leaped to evolution. Some may say, this same evolutionary need is judging our need to experimenting on animals. We have survived many diseases and viral pandemics by doing that. Just in the recent case during COVID 19, we first experimented with new antibodies to assume the following result on humans. It's in our nature to survive but, is it humane to experiment on the poor animals?
During these experiments, many animals get paralyzed or internally injured before dying. We cannot even imagine the pain they go through before death. Sometimes experiment fails which results in all their pain and suffering useless. Is it humane to intentionally brutally kill animals so that we possibly avoid our suffering?
The answer is no but at the same time, it is necessary too. And I believe, we are continuously finding the best alternative for that. Some University scientists are pursuing solutions in artificial intelligence, others are finding it in human cells and ligaments but we will be there soon. Doing experiments is the only thing which made us survive and develop so much and we are using it for the sake of animals too. So I think it's good for both of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91929824561 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82233976048 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8645767495 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230541736524 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676975384101 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665378134211 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140624267426 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350413382104 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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