Hawaiian island chain

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Hawaiian island chain

The diagram illustrates the Hawaiian island chain that is located in the middle of the Pacific Ocean.

Overall, the Hawaiian island chain started building due to the shifting of pacific tectonic plates, this chain started 80 million years ago, resulting in the development of several major islands over the years.

Hawaiian island chain sits at the top of the pacific plate, below is solid dense rock. The process begins with eruption originating 2883km down the sea level. Due to eruption magma spume starts to build up, but the hot spot spume remains stable. Because of multiple eruptions build-up, a new volcano emerges. Besides this, the interesting thing to notice is the shifting of tectonic plates, these plates change position 7-9cm annually. The movement of the tectonic plates creates space for a new volcano for an eruption.

Major islands within 100km of this area are Maui, Molokai, Oahu, and Kauai and because of eruption and sliding of the plates, the center of the Pacific Ocean is changing.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16265060241 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34971422025 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6499970227 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339108180092 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144934918274 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18915661698 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263491547515 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16260424665 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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