Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?
Youngsters who have been studying in their interested fields may have persuaded to have one dimensional life which is allocating all of their time to study. However, learning new skills and being aware of up to date science facts have been a significant part of human’s life, trying to be in shape has been another important side. Therefore, some people believe in assigning the exact same amount of money for both in universities. I totally agree with this view based on some reasons which will be mentioned in this essay.
First of all, the main reason why I have this kind of opinion is the fact that a healthy mind which could be able to learn new things definitely needs being in good physical condition. Likewise, Children cannot expect from their sick bodies to have ability to stay up at nights and study for their exams. For example, if some students have been educated under some bad circumstance, she or he will not be able to get good grades. And even if they got, they would hurt their bodies which cannot not be reformed easily.
Additionally, in today’s world human has been trying to have a life with various aspects in order to enjoy every moment of their life. That has given them a power to know how to act when it comes to their difficulties. Because of that, not only should parents teach their children how to make their future career and work on their weaknesses, but also have to convince them to spend their time on exercising as well as their other age appropriate activities. For instance, people's life has become more meaningful when they have been doing suitable activities for their ages which cannot be replaced just by studying, such as inseparable role of playing games in their childhood. Consequently, being fit makes individuals stronger so they would be able to get over their issues when their bodies are as healthy and modern as their mind.
In conclusion, although allocating much time to study has been one of the main job for teenagers, they must know if they are not in a good health, there would be fewer chances to be successful in their life. For those reasons many people including myself have had the opinion which the equal amount of money should be devoted in both libraries and sport activities by universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75757575758 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50974023381 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.017311693 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212482836742 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759424220201 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516795896386 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139231998821 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557245760482 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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