Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often assumed that job satisfaction plays a more integral part than job security. Although I sympathize with the view of point, I hold the opinion that people should take into account permanence, as they cannot always expect work gratification.
There are many compelling reasons why one of the top priority must be job satisfaction. On the one hand, employees can make the most of work passion to stand a chance of enhancing the level of job performance, and therefore gaining a competitive edge compared to discouraged workers. On the other hand, a heavy workload or an enormous strain is not capable of doing employees a disservice, as satisfaction leads to the potential of improving work outcomes at all costs.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, I would contend that security is important in one’s career. The job market has become very competitive as it is, in fact, a high probability of unemployment is a serious issue that leads to an economical crisis and budget deficits. Therefore, if people have a permanent job, their expenditure and quality of life will be enhanced, ensuring the development of nations. Furthermore, if the national and local authorities face a dilemma, for instance, the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic, job security would be a sustainable backbone to assist people to keep going.
All in all, both job satisfaction and security play an indispensable role in work, and people should better balance them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ent is a serious issue that leads to an economical crisis and budget deficits. Therefore, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10053954009 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5476834493 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347448505349 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12627792996 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810237165236 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209688702557 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884656721821 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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