In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Economic development is the first priority for many governments across the world. The major advantage is reduction in the number of unemployed people, and disadvantage being increased air and noise pollution levels. However, this essay agrees that economic growth is more important as it can help in building a nation and also tackle pollution related issues.
The major disadvantage is rise in air and noise pollution levels which affect the quality of life. To expedite commercial activities, cities around the world have lost forest cover around it and are surrounded by industries which constantly release carbon and many toxic metals into the air, in addition to this, the increasing number of automobiles on the roads have also contributed in deteriorating the quality of air and increasing sound levels. This has led to many respiratory illnesses among people. For instance, according to WHO, Delhi has the worst air quality index which resulted in irreversible lung damage in more than 40% of children. However, countries with stronger economy are able to reduce pollution levels using technology more effectively as compared to nations with poor economy.
Financial development provides job opportunities for people of different ages and gender. For a sustainable economic growth, governments have to increase manufacturing of goods and services from various sectors such as textiles, automobiles, pharmaceuticals and so on, in order to fulfill these demands massive workforce is needed. Subsequently, average income of people increases which helps the government to generate more money through tax and improve public sector. For example, the unemployment rate in India has been significantly reduced since two decades, after prioritizing economic development, which significantly increased the tax revenue. Governments can utilize this fund to invest in technology to reduce pollution and conserve environment.
To conclude, although economic growth leads to significant air and noise pollution it generates employment and stronger economy which can help in improving the quality of life of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66352201258 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03580156394 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3776941623 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.642857143 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124547027805 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048013387237 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346263783258 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858914854054 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414137194207 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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