Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is it true that young people nowadays are better at making decisions about their own lives than it used to be? When it comes to this question, the answers differ considerably from individual to individual. Some argue that parents with more experience can provide considerable help, while others believe that children can make better choices without interference. Both of the opposite arguments appear to be convincing and stand to reason, yet my personal experience and personal observations have led me to conclude that young people are capable of making decisions on their own.
To begin with, there are sufficient resources on the internet for people to refer to. People with different specialties like to share their thoughts and suggestions to guide people's way. In short, it is so easy to obtain relevant information online in order to solve our problems.
Secondly, society has changed vastly in every aspect. Based on this consideration, our parents with older thoughts and skills may not be sufficient enough for us to depend on them. Also, the best thing about life is to explore the world by our selves, so we can try to be adventurous without thinking about the consequences.
Last but not least, the convention has changed during the evolution of time with the influence of western society. The concepts of our parents may not be the best for us to depend on, since they grew up in a more conservative world. In other words, their response may not be possible to solve upcoming problems.
In conclusion, given the reasons above, I strongly think that people are better at making their own decisions in modern society. That is not to say that the other opinions are completely out of merits. Nevertheless, I believe my points of view which were provided are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in short, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7384096472 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0740390975 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3125 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325107059959 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965935957609 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115734233399 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160078539293 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905838334909 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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