Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In today's era, picking a course plays a vital role in a student's life. Even though, it is believed that pupils should take the subject in the university which leads to getting high salary jobs. I completely disagree with this notion.
The major should have been taken according to their interests because it can be proved as a disaster in the future. For example, a country like India where parents decide their child's career has more unemployment and failure rate as compared to other nations in which mostly all children have the freedom of choosing their career profession. If students will forcefully choose their subjects under the influence of others, they will suffer a lot in terms of their academics and career too. Therefore, the subject should be chosen wisely by the students.
Meanwhile, most students pick their major in a university due to the chance of getting a high paying salary instead of choosing their best interest. Moreover, it can create unhappiness and dissatisfaction in their lives. However, they could earn more money if they choose a major in a university by keeping money in their mind. Although, they cannot buy happiness or be satisfied with money. Whereas, If they considered their interest that will become more successful and can recreate their professional life despite having an unsatisfactory job with zero interest at all.
In the end, most of the students are in a dilemma situation while choosing their major in a university but the decision should be taken by the students by keeping their best subjects in their minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...icking a course plays a vital role in a students life. Even though, it is believed that ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, therefore, whereas, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.030651341 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65793258534 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7425400321 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200576770816 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791720977358 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495903273161 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138750568319 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118376580791 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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