You have been invited to a music concert.
You are unable to go due to some reason. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
* Explain why don't you want to attend the concert?
* Thank your friend for invitation
* Give an alternative solution.
Dear Lavanya,
I'm fine here, and hope you're also sailing in the same boat. I wanna offer you the tickets of the music concert 'The Musical Night'.
You'd be delighted to know that there'll be a live musical night in our city, which'll host your favourite bollywood singer 'Mr. Jagjit Singh'.This concert will be held on the fifth of next month at our city stadium in your vicinity. Moreover, they'll provide complementary drinks and snacks during the programme.
Although, I was very excited to be a part of it, I won't be able to participate in it. The reason is I've my IAS exam in Delhi on the same date; thus, I won't be available on that day as the exam venue is quite far from our city.
As I've already bought two tickets, I really want you to utilise those entries. You can easily collect it from my place as it is on the way from your work to home. So, prepare yourself for a grand night.
Hope you'll have a blast there!
With love,
Ramity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4406779661 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24997827703 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3322510708 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180409867362 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653157050035 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602500501898 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986271737469 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696880652814 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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