The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.
The given line graph reveals the change in the proportion of Australian exports to 4 different areas including Japan, China, US and India between 1990 and 2012.
Overall, it is evident that while the figures for Japan and US significantly declined, the percentages of India and China rose. Compared exports to 4 countries, the amount of China reached a peak in 2012.
The percentage of Japan was the highest starting point, stood at over 25 percent, the opposite was true for the figure for India was 20 percent lower than that of Japan in 1990. Besides, there was a sharp decrease up to nearly 10 percent in proportion of Japan. Similarly, the figure for US saw a remark decline from 11 percent in 1990 to 5 percent in 2012.
Regarding the figures for China and India, while the percentage of India slightly increased to 5 percent in 2012, the proportion of China witnessed a significant rise, which has 5 times than the proportion of India. The highest point in the line graph was the percentage of China in 2012, approximately 28 percent.
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- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
- The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 67
- The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less much'?
Suggestion: less much
...e was true for the figure for India was less more 20 percent than the amount of Japan. Be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, regarding, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67949969827 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3060183803 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18303709082 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100672858882 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749433659608 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136196353328 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594623086238 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.