Tourism is an ever growing industry
What benefits do you think brings to individuals and society.
Advancement and sophistication in technology has moulded the world into one big family,encouraging people to travel around the globe. This enhances tourism across the world and has made this sector one of the most evergreen fields. In my essay, I will explain how has it supported individuals and society of the receipient countries.
Growth in technology has enabled people to travel and explore the places nearby and far. This has created ample opportunities for individuals of the host country to employ themselves and uplift their standards of living. Individuals ensure, that they maintain an extremely hygenic environment to welcome tourists. People also learn new languages to communicate with travelers. Also, they develop their cooking and baking skills to make sure tourists feel home.
Tourism, simultaneously develops hotel and education industry assisting society. Recent survey by "The Times", found that crime rate is negligible in a place which is a tourists destination. This is because citizens can have a good life style with clean surrounding to live with. Evidently,reducing the crime rate and lesseing the burden of government. Furtheremore,availability of transport to cushion tourism also eases local's routine life. Nevertheless, tourism enhances cultural amalgamation which in turn is a positive for society.
To conclude, I opine that travelling for leisure can not only benefit individuals or society but also government by receiving foreign income which can be utilised for creating opportunities for its citizens. It also helps in reducing unemployment and poverty, which can result in overall development of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , encouraging
...as moulded the world into one big family,encouraging people to travel around the globe. This...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...ate is negligible in a place which is a tourists destination. This is because citizens c...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reducing
...lean surrounding to live with. Evidently,reducing the crime rate and lesseing the burden ...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , availability
...g the burden of government. Furtheremore,availability of transport to cushion tourism also ea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3977310076 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8326723707 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115094171254 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347126172144 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399429435681 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640335768372 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00515384931167 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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