In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the problems?
With the soar development of the information technology and transportation, it is available for us to purchase things produced in other parts of the worlds. This can bring us convenience, while still have some shortages.
The possibility to buy goods from other countries has plenty of advantages. First, it is possible for us to buy special things that only be made in other countries, which allows us to experience foreign styles. And we can buy some high-tech electronic products with good quality from other countries, such products bring us more fun and convenience. What’s more, some agricultural products from other countries are cheaper than those in our own countries. Take fruits as an example, some tropical fruits from southeast Asia are much cheaper for Japanese, they can enjoy sweeter and cheaper fruits in this case.
However, this kind of globalization can bring some problems for producers and consumers in our countries. Due to the environmental limitation, some products cannot be made for a large quantity in homeland, the same type of goods import from other countries can cause serious competition for these producers, which made them become hard to earn a living. For consumers, though some products are with good quality and high technology, they are more expensive because of the tax and other fees. Especially, some seafoods import from other countries can take virus, if the safety department cannot check them out, they can cause diseases for residents after entering the marketing.
In conclusion, though some new products with high quality can bring many advantages to our daily life, they still have some problems for the producers and consumers in our homeland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24908424908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79488859759 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4111442634 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319252051109 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138656377031 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535249371624 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190291638304 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740847703336 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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