In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
obesity is a medical condition in which excess body fat is accumulated it may hurt health. The increase in the average weight of people is becoming a major problem in several nations and it causes more damage to the people in their health. This essay will give the causes of the problems and gives possible solutions.
on the one hand, It is true that an increasing number of people are faced with obesity and have a problem with health-related issues. The phenomenal increase in people suffering from obesity has several reasons. for instance, children, teens, tend to more junk foods and soft drinks. This would lead to a higher intake of fat and sugar, making people put on weight and obesity..apart from this the other reason is many young, adult people spend hours in social media, so this sedentary lifestyle leads to physical inactivity, so more people prone to many diseases like diabetes, breathing problems.
on the other hand, numerous remedies can be taken to solve this problem. will the government impose a tax on junk foods and soft drinks? If these unhealthy foods are high priced fewer people will consume them. Despite this, people should come forward to buy fruits and vegetables and eat healthily can reduce the amount of fat
and provide nutrition to your body.furthermore people should aware of health and they have to do some physical activities like jogging, swimming to be fit hale and healthy They can also join the gym and can do other sports activities to keep them physically fit.so we have to ensure that we have to take healthy foods and keep us away from obesity sickness.
to sum up, It is true that are many people are having problems with body weight and health conditions. The problems are because of unhealthy lifestyles. people can overcome these problems by choosing their diets and they should have more exercise in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obesity
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se a tax on junk foods and soft drinks? If these unhealthy foods are high priced f...
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...keep us away from obesity sickness. to sum up, It is true that are many people...
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Suggestion: People
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Line 8, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould have more exercise in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8934169279 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50276524774 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.296093279 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246733744491 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910960476652 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688426802463 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145558936932 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433729376445 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obesity
obesity is a medical condition in which excess ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...oblems and gives possible solutions. on the one hand, It is true that an increa...
^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ering from obesity has several reasons. for instance, children, teens, tend to more...
^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... making people put on weight and obesity..apart from this the other reason is many...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...s like diabetes, breathing problems. on the other hand, numerous remedies can b...
^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...ies can be taken to solve this problem. will the government impose a tax on junk foo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se a tax on junk foods and soft drinks? If these unhealthy foods are high priced f...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...keep us away from obesity sickness. to sum up, It is true that are many people...
^^
Line 8, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ms are because of unhealthy lifestyles. people can overcome these problems by choosing...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould have more exercise in their life.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8934169279 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50276524774 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.296093279 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246733744491 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910960476652 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688426802463 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145558936932 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433729376445 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.