You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter,
* explain that you would like to apply for the job
* give some details of any relevant experience that you have
* specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is regarding your advertisement on Monster.com for a part-time job in your restaurant for which I am, herby, applying for the post of the Evening Bar-Manager.
I would like to take the opportunity to highlight I have appropriate experience with not only building strategies to expand your foot-falls in your developing segment of younger working professionals but I am also a certified Mixologist & Sommelier from the Blue Ray School of Spirits. My strength is pairing fine wines with menu choices customers make and co-creating new cocktails with chefs who design the food for your restaurant.
I am happy to align my work hours to cover the targeted young professional segments who will frequent the bar & restaurant post office hours. As a part time role, I am open working 5p.m. to 10p.m on weekdays.
I have several ideas on how we can grow your business to make it more competitive which I am anxious to share with you. May I request for a meeting with you on Saturday at 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and time which is more convenient to you.
Attached is my resume with my contact details.
Looking forward to our meeting.
Many thanks.
Your sincerely,
Fergus
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ar & restaurant post office hours. As a part time role, I am open working 5p.m. to 10p.m ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...meeting with you on Saturday at 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and...
^
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u on Saturday at 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and time which is m...
^^
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and time which is more convenient ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95631067961 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95500161134 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9433314902 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200516229427 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640259853122 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618535177216 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848897197849 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785820672854 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ar & restaurant post office hours. As a part time role, I am open working 5p.m. to 10p.m ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...meeting with you on Saturday at 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and...
^
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u on Saturday at 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and time which is m...
^^
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t 10 a.m. , alternatively I am open to an date and time which is more convenient ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95631067961 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95500161134 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9433314902 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200516229427 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640259853122 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618535177216 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848897197849 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785820672854 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.