You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
In your letter,
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter with regard to the some important documents that i mistakenly left behind at your hotel. Yesterday, I attended the annual construction factories managers meeting held at your hotel. Although the meeting was a huge success but unfortunately I forgot some documents while leaving in the rush .
The meeting was held at the Tulip conference hall of the hotel , hence, I believe that the documents must be there.Since, the seats were assigned numbers it will be easy to know the exact locaion of papers. I was sitiing at seat no 12, which was at extreme right corner of the central table. the file was in the drawer inside the table infront of the seat.
The file contained some official documents regarding our firm's future plans. Some of them are confidential and extremely valuable to our company. They must not fall in the wrong hands or otherwise we will have to face serious setbacks.
Kindly search the hall andinform me immediately. My secretary will come to collect the file as soon as it is found. Your hotel is well reputed for it esteemed values, customer care and satisfaction ,therefore i trust and that you will keep the file safe and secure.
Looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Thankyou for your cooperation in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Thomas Kennedy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... writing this letter with regard to the some important documents that i mistakenly l...
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Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...some documents while leaving in the rush . The meeting was held at the Tulip conf...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t the Tulip conference hall of the hotel , hence, I believe that the documents mus...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...elieve that the documents must be there.Since, the seats were assigned numbers it wil...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elieve that the documents must be there.Since, the seats were assigned numbers it wil...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...reme right corner of the central table. the file was in the drawer inside the table...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d values, customer care and satisfaction ,therefore i trust and that you will keep...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...stomer care and satisfaction ,therefore i trust and that you will keep the file s...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... file safe and secure. Looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Thankyou ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87610619469 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64841108134 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641592920354 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9567464169 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250789945272 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067527233434 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072627425622 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120991204831 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744598144871 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.