At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults. Compare with number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?
It is reported that there is a massive growing in number of young people in comparison with aging people in some nations around the world. There is no doubt that many demerits are brought by this situation in compare of merits. In this essay I will put reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
Although young generation society means joyful and content country, this generation need various facilities during their life long. Adolescent society will be faced many dilemma in terms of finding suitable career, universities competitions, residential areas, food limitation and overpopulation due to more children will be generated. These kinds of Barriers are result of hug number of demands in specific time period. Therefore, government should budget more for meeting their fundamental needs.
Another reason for my position is restriction in expert labors. When a city is full of immature people in work fields, companies will confront with lack of professional employee. So many drawbacks can be predicted and evaluated. For instance, incompetent managers, unqualified teachers or in inefficient doctors who will brought many expenses to become enough qualified in their occupations.
Moreover, overpopulation which will be happened by young people needs to use a great deal of natural resources. For example the young generations for meeting their daily necessities should use more fuel fossils. If natural fuel is used quickly, it will pose devastating effect on future life.
In conclusion, based on above considerations, I personally believe that the disadvantages of imbalance in age of population have more detrimental consequences in human’s life in compare of it advantageous. Overpopulation in young generation can lead society to having more difficulties in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51985559567 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12739579604 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9415853498 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157408344716 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050311591472 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580575984545 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922022498641 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794166018017 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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