Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some people point out that the loss of biodiversity is the worst environmental problem of all time, others assert that other vital environmental problems should be taken into consideration. Both points of view will be discussed in this essay and I will give my opinion afterward.
On the one hand, people believe that losing specific species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem. This belief happens due to the role that these species play in our daily life. They, indeed, help us to moderate the climate and the natural habitat as well as preventing the biological crisis. Since these species are parts of food chains, the loss of them might contribute to the instinct of several animals. Moreover, it is undeniable that the loss of them will be the permanent loss of genes and references for biological and chemical research. Some species play as remedies for some diseases, which contain rare chemicals; therefore, the cure would run out when these species disappear.
On the other hand, other environmental problems should not be overlooked. One of them is global warming. This happens due to a large amount of carbon dioxide from vehicles, factories, air conditioners, greenhouse effects and results in the rise of sea level which would cause the loss of homeland for mankind and natural habitat for numerous species. Another concerning problem is pollution which includes water, air, land. Most of them are mainly caused by human and they do not only slowly destroy the earth but they also cause permanent diseases such as cancer. These problems would lead to the destruction of biodiversity after all.
In conclusion, both sides have merits. On balance, I, however, tend to believe that people should see the big picture rather than assume the biological crisis is the worst problem of all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, after all, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08637873754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66099476641 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1404423698 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327682919007 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983526207844 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926284229014 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18962255809 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914975747696 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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