Some people believe that advertising is extremely successful at a pursuing ine to buy things other believe that advertising is so common that are not people taking interest give discuss both the view and give your opinion.
It is ubiquitously known that advert are common to see on screen and newspaper.This notion has gone under sea changes. ever sense technology took place.A section of society adhere that advertising has been most powerful method to attract the customer while other seems differently.This essay shall elucidate the both prospective along with my slant in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why advertising get successful in this epoch that the shortage of time.To be more precise,working people have hectic schedule. Owing to this, they did not to get a time for shopping or choose the things.They always purchased the thing after watching the advert on television , newspaper or internet.For instance, a survey report showing result 85% people in western spent surplus amount of their salary to brought unnecessary thing, after watch the advertisement whereas other people save the money who were not watching the same content.Thus, people force advertisement to spent a hefty amount of money on shopping.Moreover, the child has great influence from advert as they are innocent. To illustrate, they always believe on it and convince their parents to purchase their favourite things which has presented by their favourite cartoon character.To examplify, In 2019 80% shopping done by children side after watch their favourite cartoons character advert such as In India has famous Cartoon Been balll, badminton, shoes and cloth also. Consequently, advert always influence the people to attract and buy things.
However, in this period advertisements has been becoming uncommon reason are firstly, people are educated they know the strategy behind the advert. By this I mean, If they purchase under influence of the advert then definitely lost their precious income.Not only this but also they may not save their income.To cite example, In Japan, Government has banned on advertise that people become stress-free.Owing to this,they were not forced to buy things to take debit from different forms.Hence, advert has harmful effect of make the people aware now peoples are not taking interest to watch this unnecessary advert.Finally, By watching films on television adverts creat disturbance. By this I want to say, people ignore to watch these advert as disturb their interest during watching the movie.Resultly, now people are aware they did not a bother to watch the advert.
To recapitulate, after discussing the both view I velehmely voch that although both views are acceptable on some extend yet advertisement has a crucial benefit as they are always a snatched the interest of the people and aware them about the new products.I believe that advert has numerous advantage and this get more success day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36596736597 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98356413516 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.917139303 49.4020404114 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.2 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.9 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221508449468 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999298572532 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056255473721 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147828606033 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598953213092 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.