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According to my point of view, it depends on culture of people and their trends.in other words, it can be different person by person, and some people like travelling in their own country, while other people prefer to travel to foreign countries. I hold that opinion for several reasons. First, people, who enjoy travelling in their own country, probably they like that because of several reasons such as considering low expenses or interested in their own country vehemently. Second, people who prefer to travel to foreign countries also have their own reasons for doing that, and perhaps they are eager to know much about different cultures, or visiting some new areas.
I personally think that people who enjoy travelling in their own country, probably for several purposes. Travelling inside the country cost lower than travelling abroad, because when someone wants to go abroad, he should pay extra expenses such as departure and Visa bills, while if he decide to travel to a near city in his country, he need not to pay those extra expenses. Besides, there are so many persons that prefer to travel in their own country, because it seems to them that their country is the best place for travel, and it is not necessary to travel to foreign countries to have enjoyable moments.
On the other hand, most people think that it is better for them to travel to foreign countries, and actually they are right in their own situation, because travelling to foreign country is more exciting and interesting. For instance, when I was 17 years old,I went to turkey for travel with my family in summer vacation. I had very good and funny times during my trip.because i visited several exciting places such as monuments,museums ,and Istanbul natural park. also, i have many enjoyable memories from that trip,specifically when we went to Aqua park. so, to me, travelling to turkey was so unforgettable.
generally, it depends on people's trend and demands that where they prefer to travel. but, in my opinion, wherever you decide to travel is not important,with whom you travel is important.
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- TPO 45 integrated writing skill 70
- TPO 42 integrated writing skill 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...s departure and Visa bills, while if he decide to travel to a near city in his country...
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Suggestion: pay
...a near city in his country, he need not to pay those extra expenses. Besides, there ar...
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Suggestion: , I
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... and funny times during my trip.because i visited several exciting places such as...
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Suggestion: , museums
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Suggestion: , and
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Suggestion: Generally
...elling to turkey was so unforgettable. generally, it depends on peoples trend and demand...
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...er you decide to travel is not important,with whom you travel is important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95428571429 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70798667588 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497142857143 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1737169832 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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