The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph reveals, about the drinking habit of US people according to their age.
Overall, as shown in the graph, the percentage of non-drinkers are high in almost every age group , while, heavy drinkers are lowest.
In details, the majority of heavy drinkers are in the age between 35 to 54, with over 10%, although, the younger people (16 to 24 age group) and old age group (65-74) are in the least rank with approximately 5% and 3% respectively.
Likewise age group from 25 -34 contain the high level of light drinkers and 65-74 age group have lowest percentage with around 34% and 5% respectively.
As coming to ex-drinkers, the old age (64-74) are the highest ex-drinkers with about 40% and age from 25-34 remain lowest with almost 5%.
As depicts by graph, the large proportion of US population are non-drinkers with sufficient percentage(around 60%) from the young age group (16-24), while,, 65-74 age group is the lowest with approximately 43%, similarly, there is no more fluctuation on others age groups too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nkers are high in almost every age group , while, heavy drinkers are lowest. In d...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...approximately 5% and 3% respectively. Likewise age group from 25 -34 contain the high ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
...l of light drinkers and 65-74 age group have lowest percentage with around 34% and 5% respe...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...0% from the young age group 16-24, while,, 65-74 age group is the lowest with appr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91279069767 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83181544649 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0668054109 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.833333333 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134640643742 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100421850157 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781066530785 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100421850157 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781066530785 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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